funny monkey

Friday 19 October 2012

DIAMANTE


War
Murderous, Brutal
Agonizing, Shooting, Destroying
People dying, hiding in trenches
Killing, struggling, Bombarding
Bloodshed, hostel
Peace
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4 comments:

  1. Livy's Super Silly19 October 2012 at 08:58

    Nice Jessie!
    I like how you use words that are outside the box!!

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  2. Kate'z Totally Outragous ♥19 October 2012 at 09:09

    Damn girl!! Beautiful poem. Love the descriptive words!! Teno pai!!

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  3. $H@NI@H -_-19 October 2012 at 09:49

    nice one jess. I like the descriptive words you used. :)

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  4. -_-j3$$ie^_^25 October 2012 at 18:33

    Good work Jessie I love how you added a lot of descriptive language. He Rawe kotiro Natalie

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