funny monkey

Friday 19 October 2012

Personification Poem


The flares flooding out of its trunk,
Pushing out its poison bullet
Our tracks chomping and crushing
Destroying anything that gets in its way.

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2 comments:

  1. I like how you used the words chomping and crushing because it's out of the box. :)

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  2. I think that Jessie has used a lot of descriptive language in her poem. Natalie

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